11/8/13
· What students learned and which
students struggled with the lesson
Students learned how to properly
write a thank you letter.
Students struggled with
expressing how they benefited and why they were grateful to the person they
were thanking.
· What are alternate reads of your
students’ performance or products?
I finally found time to fully
address the letter writing and used an extended amount of time to have students
review and rewrite their letters based on my input and teaching. Some students
found this exercise to be very easy as they wrote with great detail and met all
expectations. For the students who had been struggling, I believe they improved
their abilities to write after being given more specific instruction. All
students improved from their original draft to the final letter.
· What did you learn about your
students’ literacy practices that extend beyond your objectives?
The students wanted to write a
good letter worthy of sending to the people they were meant for. I learned that
students can be very engaged in writing when they find the purpose meaningful
and connected to their personal life.
· When and how will you re-teach the
material to students who need additional support?
This thank you letter exercise is
completed. In our next class, I will ask the students how the recipients of
their letters responded and will answer any questions during this time.
· If you were to teach this same
lesson again, what would you do differently and how do you think the changes
would improve students’ learning?
I would devote much more time at
the beginning of the exercise to explain exactly what I want to see and set
very clear expectations for the students. I would also be sure to model the format
in which the students were to write at the beginning. I think this modeling and
setting of expectations would positively influence the students as they would
not need to guess at what I want.
· What did you learn so far about
implementing your ‘core practice’ and what do you need to do to continue your
professional learning?
I found that students were capable of incorporating the vocabulary
words rather easily with their thank you letters. However, they struggled when
they were trying to fit a different form of the word. Several students who
changed to a different form of our vocabulary words used them incorrectly. I
think I need to allow the students to explore the words more and have them use
the various forms so they can have a greater understanding of their vocabulary.
You mentioned that students struggled to express why they were grateful and how they benefited. This could become a focus for future re-teaching, connected to another assignment. Re-teaching does not always have to happen within a unit; it can spill over into the next unit if students need it, either through small group work on the same writing piece or through related work on a different piece that addresses the same basic struggles. You can keep working on letters with students in small groups or individually until their work meets the desired standards, even if that moves beyond the unit timeline.
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