Monday, November 11, 2013

Day 5 11/8

11/8/13
·         What students learned and which students struggled with the lesson
Students learned how to properly write a thank you letter.

Students struggled with expressing how they benefited and why they were grateful to the person they were thanking.

·         What are alternate reads of your students’ performance or products?
I finally found time to fully address the letter writing and used an extended amount of time to have students review and rewrite their letters based on my input and teaching. Some students found this exercise to be very easy as they wrote with great detail and met all expectations. For the students who had been struggling, I believe they improved their abilities to write after being given more specific instruction. All students improved from their original draft to the final letter.

·         What did you learn about your students’ literacy practices that extend beyond your objectives?
The students wanted to write a good letter worthy of sending to the people they were meant for. I learned that students can be very engaged in writing when they find the purpose meaningful and connected to their personal life.

·         When and how will you re-teach the material to students who need additional support?
This thank you letter exercise is completed. In our next class, I will ask the students how the recipients of their letters responded and will answer any questions during this time.

·         If you were to teach this same lesson again, what would you do differently and how do you think the changes would improve students’ learning?
I would devote much more time at the beginning of the exercise to explain exactly what I want to see and set very clear expectations for the students. I would also be sure to model the format in which the students were to write at the beginning. I think this modeling and setting of expectations would positively influence the students as they would not need to guess at what I want.

·         What did you learn so far about implementing your ‘core practice’ and what do you need to do to continue your professional learning?

I found that students were capable of incorporating the vocabulary words rather easily with their thank you letters. However, they struggled when they were trying to fit a different form of the word. Several students who changed to a different form of our vocabulary words used them incorrectly. I think I need to allow the students to explore the words more and have them use the various forms so they can have a greater understanding of their vocabulary. 

1 comment:

  1. You mentioned that students struggled to express why they were grateful and how they benefited. This could become a focus for future re-teaching, connected to another assignment. Re-teaching does not always have to happen within a unit; it can spill over into the next unit if students need it, either through small group work on the same writing piece or through related work on a different piece that addresses the same basic struggles. You can keep working on letters with students in small groups or individually until their work meets the desired standards, even if that moves beyond the unit timeline.

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